Here is part two as posted on LinkedIn:
​https://www.linkedin.com/feed/update/urn:li:activity:6368512703102742528

When I edit, I try to simplify the language and smooth some of the jargon. Many academics use jargon to simplify their writing. Common examples are the elimination of articles, noun pairs instead of 's, and catchall words like suggest or impact.
The following link is the first part of two on the reasoning for my editing style:

https://www.chronicle.com/article/PhDs-Are-Still-Writing/241700
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